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request for honest feedback for *Trapped*

Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Bjarke Tan, Mar 20, 2018.

  1. #1 Bjarke Tan, Mar 20, 2018

    The most recent piece I have composed

    I was very inspired by the mood from the Cloverfield paradox Netflix movie
    I didn't really have any specific goal for this piece other than trying to have a mood where it would give the impression something really bad was going on for example in a film scene

    thanks in advance
     
  2. #2 Paul T McGraw, Mar 21, 2018
    Pretty good piece. Since your goal is to be ominous, I have a couple of ideas you might try. First try to use augmented chords a lot. Second you could try to use a pedal tone that is totally outside of any harmonies going on above it. Riveted suspended cymbal is always good. Or bowed cymbal.

    But it was pretty good as is. And got better toward the end.
     
  3. #3 Bjarke Tan, Mar 22, 2018
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