My Unleashed 7 vanished piece

Hello @Mike Verta,

This is the piece I've sent for Unleashed 7 that disappeared in the process.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/si20nw2sh7y82yd/Il est l'heure (a Christmas lullaby).mp3?dl=0

Thank you for your time !

 

Hello Mike,

Thank you so much for your feedback. My intention was to write something very simple from a 3 notes motif, maybe not my best idea...

Anyway, I've worked on the first bars and I hope I understood what you explained to me.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/mauia8vm7zpvb6s/il_est_l_heure.mp3?dl=0

edit : Btw, it doesn't end like this, the last chord is just a direction for my modulation.