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Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Cody Ortz, Apr 20, 2018.

  1. #1 Cody Ortz, Apr 20, 2018
    Alright, here it is... the first post. Looking forward to the feedback!





    My WW samples aren't fantastic, but I'm reasonably happy with the rest of them. I'm definitely curious to hear what you guys think of the vibe of the piece and the structure. I'm a little concerned that the B section is too different from the A section. Your thoughts are appreciated though!
     
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  2. #2 John Eldridge, Apr 21, 2018
    Welcome and thanks for sharing some music! I'm a sucker for this style/vibe. It came across as pleasant and laid back. Would be fun to hear a non-virtual version of it if you get a chance to have it performed. My thoughts while listening...

    @ 1:13 trumpet tension on the rhythm... I would have liked just the straight eigths version here and come back with the triplets later after you let the strings introduce that figure at 1:30.
    @ 1:49, 1:59, 2:14 all felt like good opportunities to modulate if you wanted to have things build further.
     
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